Six Questions (from Pablo Neruda)

Over at dVerse Poets Pub  Laura Bloomsbury in Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft is our host and has asked us to write Ghazal using at least one of the lines by Pablo Neruda from his book of poetry – “The Book of Questions” in which he poses 320 questions and answers in couplet form, and she has asked us to use at least one of the six question lines she has selected. I found all six questions stimulating and linked them in this poem.

Why was I not born mysterious? – Sorrowful
Then nations would smite down my enemy furious – angry

Why did I grow up without companions – lonely
compadres and friends in this world so curious? – and unloved

And do unshed tears wait in little lakes – weeping
lurking to ambush we unwary and drown us? – vulnerable

And Why does Spring once again offer its green clothes – landless
springing up in the rubble of our homes mocking us? – homeless

How long do others speak if we have already spoken – quashed
one hundred years, pleading, crying and dying in the dust? – and denied

Even hope itself may eventually die – we should be hopeless
Isn’t it better never than too late for us? – flattened too.

How long do others speak if we have already spoken? – We still
As long as it takes for you to hear us – cry out

And Why does Spring once again offer its green clothes? – bear children
Because life must triumph, improbable, delirious – all we can

And do unshed tears wait in little lakes? – don’t hold back
Yes but cry them, use them, water the dust – start again

Why did I grow up without companions? – seek new friends
Because the world heard only another victim’s fuss – in a world of oppressed

Why was I not born mysterious? – we find other victims in common
See the wonderful in the ordinary which is us – our voices raised together

There are no especially deserving winners – give us all our due
no one deserves our land over us – “Equality now!”

Equal status and our own statehood – “Never Again!
with nobody ruling over us – “Give us Our Due!”

Borrowing these six Neruda questions – “Now!”
the poet, Andrew, seeks to give voice to us…

© Andrew Wilson, 2024

10 thoughts on “Six Questions (from Pablo Neruda)

  • March 8, 2024 at 7:06 pm
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    It’s fascinating to me the many different functions and responsibilities different poets have given to tears. Both negative and positive, drowning and cleansing.
    The part that especially resonated with me is this “There are no especially deserving winners – give us all our due
    no one deserves our land over us”
    If only that were the way of the world…

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    • March 11, 2024 at 11:16 am
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      Sadly so Melissa…

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    • March 11, 2024 at 11:16 am
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      Thanks Merril…

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  • March 9, 2024 at 1:42 am
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    We ask questions but we often don’t really listen to the answers, especially if they are not what we want to hear.

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    • March 11, 2024 at 11:17 am
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      There are so many uneasy questions in the world at present…

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  • March 10, 2024 at 3:11 pm
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    The story of those homeless unwanted will always call to us and ask I think

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    • March 11, 2024 at 11:18 am
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      Unfortunately so Björn…

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  • March 10, 2024 at 5:46 pm
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    Andrew your response to the challenge is amazing. Truly amazing. My favorite couplet …
    “and do unshed tears wait in little lakes – weeping lurking to ambush we unwary and drown us? – vulnerable.”

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    • March 10, 2024 at 6:18 pm
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      Thank you so much Helen – I have been wracking my brains to find the connection you talked about but no joy yet – you may have to spill the beans… Please…

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