Shelved

I sit beside
a bookcase
laden with my life

The Charm of Birds
is the only gift from
my grandfather

I early read my
father’s G.B.S. complete
plays and prefaces

The camel teapot
contains half
my sister’s ashes

The group of geese is
my memento mori
to my mother

Books of hobbies
work and music
fill my shelves and brain…

© Andrew Wilson, 2024

Over at dVerse Poets Pub, merrildsmith in Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft challenges us to write to the Triversen form.

*Three-line stanzas (Tercets). Each tercet is a sentence.
The tercets are grammatical, and they are broken by breaths,
the accents and rhythms of normal speech—two to four beats per line.
*Unrhymed
The ideal length is 18 lines or 6 stanzas, but even Williams did not always follow that rule.
Ideally, each line is two to four beats, or stressed syllable (not total syllables). Williams disliked iambic pentameter, but others have written Triversen poems with more beats.
Here are some additional points that are often mentioned.
*Alliteration—it contributes to the stress syllables
*Imagist

As Ain commented on my last poem, I seem to be going through a phase of poetry memoir…

21 thoughts on “Shelved

  • August 23, 2024 at 12:55 pm
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    Thank you for sharing this piece of your life with its mementoes and memories, Andrew. I like how you describe them ones that have a special connection to loved ones. I like the memento mori geese and how they look on your shelf.

    What are the instruments at the bottom of the photo?

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    • August 23, 2024 at 1:11 pm
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      Thank you Merril – the instruments are ukulele – 2 Baritone and a tenor but all tuned to normal tuning…

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  • August 23, 2024 at 3:25 pm
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    Your shelves are not only interesting looking, they also make a triversen look easy, Andrew! I like the alliterative phrase ‘laden with my life’, which emphasises the experience and knowledge gathered in your bookcase. The camel teapot is very intriguing – why only half your sister’s ashes?

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    • August 23, 2024 at 10:33 pm
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      Thank you Kim – my sister asked for half her ashes to be spread at a favourite spot in Ireland, where she lived, and for half to be buried with my parents in Dorset, but which I have not got round to doing yet – I have become used to her residing there with me for now…

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  • August 23, 2024 at 8:04 pm
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    Lovely how you have so many lives all close to hand, and among your books that contain so many more lives.

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    • August 23, 2024 at 10:36 pm
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      Thanks, Jane – Major Barbara, Man and Superman, Pygmalion, John Bunyan, Matisse and Turner to name but a few – oh! and there’s another equally packed bookshelf with all the novels at the other end of the room…

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  • August 23, 2024 at 11:44 pm
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    A view with a room. Bookshelves tell so much!
    “a bookcase
    laden with my life” And other lives rest there. This was a lovely poem.

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    • August 24, 2024 at 11:23 am
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      Thank you D. Like in your own poem, you display a flexible view of spaces “a view with a room…”

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    • August 24, 2024 at 11:25 am
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      Thanks, Carol – perhaps writers especially, need to have books to hand…

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  • August 24, 2024 at 8:47 am
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    Hello Andrew, this is such a touching poem. I love your bookshelf with all your personal things.

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    • August 24, 2024 at 11:45 am
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      Thanks Robbie – I am in a reflective mood at present and everything is turning to memoir…

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    • August 25, 2024 at 8:53 am
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      Thanks, Rob – glad you liked it…

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    • August 26, 2024 at 4:03 pm
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      Thanks, Paul, despite the overcrowded appearance, there is a foundation in order underlying…

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  • August 29, 2024 at 11:54 pm
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    Love your book shelves, and your references to people in your life.

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    • August 30, 2024 at 7:01 am
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      Thank you Sara – they remind me of how my dad refused to allow my mother to tidy his office because although she saw chaos, he knew where everything was…

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    • October 5, 2024 at 10:24 am
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      Don’t wonder – show us…

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