Triumph and Defeat

Why does a Pyrrhic victory
feel like a defeat

Can peace be other than the
straightforward opposite of war

How often is a ceasefire
not the end of hostility

What might make an armistice
be the seed of new enmity

What if an enemy soldier
is often not the real enemy

If you should die for your country
is it for the regime, the people or a concept

How do you know whether
your enemy’s enemy is not your friend

If fifty-one percent of people are for a war
what about the forty-nine percent who aren’t

Can losers be
the winners of hearts and minds

Does triumph erode
the value of victory

When one rival triumphs in love
is only one heart broken

Is one man’s triumph ever
only the other man’s defeat…

© Andrew Wilson, 2025

Over at dVerse Poets Pub, merrildsmith in Poetics challenges us to write about Triumph and Defeat.

12 thoughts on “Triumph and Defeat

  • June 19, 2025 at 10:14 am
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    All so true, Andrew–triumph AND defeat throughout history.
    I was just thinking about this this morning–the suffering of people no matter what their governments are doing. All the innocent civilians bombed; women (and children) raped by triumphant armies, as in Berlin after WWII.

    And now here in the US, more people do not support the demented one, but his finger is on the button, and he will sign whatever orders his handlers put in front of him.

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    • June 19, 2025 at 10:25 am
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      I had thought about following each question with the example that insoired it but decided to leave them as universals that the reader can associate with their own examples – as I said – a great prompt…

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  • June 19, 2025 at 2:06 pm
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    So many important questions, and I think we are obsessed with winners and loser… the true winnners are often hiding.

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    • June 19, 2025 at 6:13 pm
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      For sure there is a lot of nuance which is not always ebident in the discussion…

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  • June 19, 2025 at 4:13 pm
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    Andrew your poem explores the complexities of victory and defeat. Very compelling, inviting the reader to step back and question the assumptions behind conflict and its outcomes – insightful questions that linger well beyond their lines – really enjoyed it 🙌

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    • June 19, 2025 at 6:17 pm
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      Thank you A J – I struggled with the prompt but when I started to reframe them as questions then it really flowed…

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  • June 19, 2025 at 5:14 pm
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    I spent darn close to an hour reading, re-reading, attempting to leave answers for each of these provocative questions .. which resulted in my brain doing cartwheels and flip-flops. NOW, see what you have done?

    In all seriousness, your questions are not simply food for thought, they are to be feasted upon, digested, and responses are required!!!!!

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    • June 19, 2025 at 6:20 pm
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      Thank you so nuch Helen – I hope you have settled diown by now and glad that you have still got something to get your teeth into…

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  • June 19, 2025 at 5:37 pm
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    A good poem that is full of food for thought, Andres!
    Winning and losing is not always as clear cut as we might like to think.

    This one always comes to my mind every time there is a conflict…

    What if an enemy soldier
    is often not the real enemy

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    • June 19, 2025 at 6:24 pm
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      Thanks Dwight – if only certain leaders could read and understand these subtleties but unfortunately they are the very ones who can’t…

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  • June 22, 2025 at 9:32 am
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    Andrew, these are very important questions and each one of us should try to answer honestly. Sadly, the decision makers are not aligned with the common people. Very compelling.

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    • June 22, 2025 at 11:24 am
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      Thank you Punam, asking questions is a more effective way of raising issues than angry rhetoric, I find…

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